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Main mistakes

• Vocabulary: iraqe war - bloodied hands Bloody hands - a cowboy head hat - there is a line/chain around the monster's neck rope - there are many deaths in Iraq casualties
• Pronouns: The monster .... He looks as if ....IT
• Stating the obvious: war is not good ... (oh, really, isn't it ....?)
• Word order: on its neck is sitting George Bush George Bush is sitting on its neck - from its claws is dripping blood blood is dripping of its claws
• Relative pronouns: a skull, what shows that .... that