mistakes-homework-13-10

Main mistakes

• Vocabulary: iraq war - bloodied hands - a cowboy head - there is a line/chain around the monster's neck - there are many deaths in Iraq
• Pronouns: The monster .... He looks as if ....
• Stating the obvious: war is not good ... (oh, really, isn't it ....?)
• Word order: on its neck is sitting George Bush - from its claws is dripping blood
• Relative pronouns: a skull, what shows that ....