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==Main mistakes==
 
==Main mistakes==
  
* ''Vocabulary'': '''iraq''' war  -  '''bloodied''' '''hands''' - a cowboy '''head''' -  there is a '''line/chain''' around the monster's neck  -  there are many '''deaths''' in Iraq  
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* ''Vocabulary'': '''iraq<span style="color:#C00000">e <span>''' war  -  '''bloodied''' '''hands''' <span style="color:#C00000">Bloody hands <span> - a cowboy '''head''' <span style="color:#C00000"> hat <span> -  there is a '''line/chain''' around the monster's neck  <span style="color:#C00000">rope <span>-  there are many '''deaths''' in Iraq <span style="color:#C00000"> casualties <span> 
* ''Pronouns'': The monster .... '''He''' looks as if ....
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* ''Pronouns'': The monster .... '''He''' looks as if ....<span style="color:#C00000">'''IT'''<span>
 
* ''Stating the obvious'': '''war is not good'''  ... (oh, really, isn't it ....?)
 
* ''Stating the obvious'': '''war is not good'''  ... (oh, really, isn't it ....?)
* ''Word order'':  '''on its neck is sitting George Bush'''   - '''from its claws is dripping blood'''
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* ''Word order'':  '''on its neck is sitting George Bush''' <span style="color:#C00000"> George Bush is sitting on its neck <span> - '''from its claws is dripping blood''' <span style="color:#C00000">blood is dripping of its claws <span>
* ''Relative pronouns'':  a skull, '''what''' shows that ....
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* ''Relative pronouns'':  a skull, '''what''' shows that .... <span style="color:#C00000"> that <span>

Aktuelle Version vom 21. Oktober 2008, 15:40 Uhr

Main mistakes

  • Vocabulary: iraqe war - bloodied hands Bloody hands - a cowboy head hat - there is a line/chain around the monster's neck rope - there are many deaths in Iraq casualties
  • Pronouns: The monster .... He looks as if ....IT
  • Stating the obvious: war is not good ... (oh, really, isn't it ....?)
  • Word order: on its neck is sitting George Bush George Bush is sitting on its neck - from its claws is dripping blood blood is dripping of its claws
  • Relative pronouns: a skull, what shows that .... that