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<font color="red">Die '''fett''' gedruckten Sachen noch korrigieren!</font>
 
<font color="red">Die '''fett''' gedruckten Sachen noch korrigieren!</font>
  
1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good li'''ve'''.
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1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good life.
  
2. Th'''a'''n one day some '''man''' came and '''cought''' Rusty and some other horses and '''put''' took! them away from their home
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2. Then one day some men came and cought Rusty and some other horses and put taught them away from their home.
  
3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frightened''',<== ??? Bezug?''' that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.
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3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frighten that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.
  
4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some month'''s''' ''',???''' was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rust'''ys''' back and legs with a heavy sack.
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4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some month. There was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rusty's back and legs with a heavy sack.
  
5.He treat'''ed''' Rusty really bad, but he called it training.
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5.He treat Rusty really bad, but he called it training.
  
6.One day a '''j'''oung woman called Cheryl came and '''take''' Rusty with her.
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6.One day a young woman called Cheryl came and took Rusty with her.
  
7.She '''tried''' Rusty very well and he dec'''ied''' to do the best for her.
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7.She treat Rusty very well and he decited to do the best for her.
  
8.Rusty and Cheryl practi'''ce?''' for rodeo events and they won the races.
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8.Rusty and Cheryl practi for rodeo events and they won the races.
  
 
9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.
 
9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.
  
 
10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.
 
10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.

Version vom 25. Juni 2008, 14:03 Uhr

Die fett gedruckten Sachen noch korrigieren!

1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good life.

2. Then one day some men came and cought Rusty and some other horses and put taught them away from their home.

3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frighten that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.

4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some month. There was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rusty's back and legs with a heavy sack.

5.He treat Rusty really bad, but he called it training.

6.One day a young woman called Cheryl came and took Rusty with her.

7.She treat Rusty very well and he decited to do the best for her.

8.Rusty and Cheryl practi for rodeo events and they won the races.

9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.

10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.