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The advert from JBS underwear attracts  the attention of men, because with this advert they want the man to buy their underwear.There is a young, sexy girl sitting on a toilet seat,almost naked just wearing a JBS pants which is hanging between their thin legs.Her boobs are only hidden by their long brown hairs.In her hands she has got a sports magazine and she is looking very sexy to the viewer of this advert, with a open mouth ( a bit) and she is looking directly to the viewer. In the left corner there is a little sentence: "Men don't want to look at naked men".This sentence will get more attention by men as by women because it's a fact that boys don't want to look at other naked boys (only if they are gay). Perhaps men think, if they would buy such a short girls like her would find them more attractive. As a result you can say that this advert succeeds and if it gets enough attention especially men will buy JBS underwear.
 
The advert from JBS underwear attracts  the attention of men, because with this advert they want the man to buy their underwear.There is a young, sexy girl sitting on a toilet seat,almost naked just wearing a JBS pants which is hanging between their thin legs.Her boobs are only hidden by their long brown hairs.In her hands she has got a sports magazine and she is looking very sexy to the viewer of this advert, with a open mouth ( a bit) and she is looking directly to the viewer. In the left corner there is a little sentence: "Men don't want to look at naked men".This sentence will get more attention by men as by women because it's a fact that boys don't want to look at other naked boys (only if they are gay). Perhaps men think, if they would buy such a short girls like her would find them more attractive. As a result you can say that this advert succeeds and if it gets enough attention especially men will buy JBS underwear.
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Version vom 19. April 2010, 10:10 Uhr

Inhaltsverzeichnis

Table of contence

About me

My name is Domink Müller and I live in Eltmann. I would like it best to go to school 12 hours a day, 7 days a week;) My favourite teacher: Of course the funny Mr.Thelenberg ( Wurzelimperium and so on)

Obama

http://www.gallup.com/poll/122411/americans-expect-income-tax-hike-obama.aspx ( what people think what will happen at the end of obama's period as president))

http://www.newstatesman.com/north-america/2009/01/obama-crisis-president ( what the world expect from obama)

Elections in Germany

I think it was a good choice to vote for the Union in coalition with the FDP

Here you can see some information about the Bundestagswahl 2009 http://www.bundestag.de/btg_wahl/index.html


See You

Homework 26th november

Estuary English

Definition:

Standard English spoken with the accent of the southeast of England. The name comes from the area around the Thames Estuary. Especially young people speak it. Many people consider it as the working class accent.

Features

Estuary English is characterised by the following features:

  • Non-rhoticity
  • Use of intrusive R.
  • A broad A (ɑː) in words such as bath, grass, laugh, etc.

Listening Example estuary English

How has the attitude to using and broadcasting non RP-varities of English developed?

A few years ago, when they introduce a new word, those words were seen as dumb or as ugly. For example they spoke in an upper-class accent but now they use new words, which seemed to be fantastic creations.No theres no more problem if a radio speaker or a Tv moderator speaks a accent.

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What is love but the strangest of feelings? A sin you swallow for the rest of your life? You've been looking for someone to believe in To love you, until your eyes run dry

She lives on disillusion road We go where the wild blood flows On our bodies we share the same scar Love me, wherever you are

How do you love with a fate full of rust? How do you turn what the savage take? You've been looking for someone you can trust To love you, again and again

How do you love in a house without feelings? How do you turn what that savage take? I've been looking for someone to believe in Love me, again and again

She lives by disillusions glow We go where the wild blood flows On our bodies, we share the same scar

How do you love on a night without feelings? She says "love, I hear sound, I see fury" She says "love's not a hostile condition" Love me, wherever you are

Love me, wherever you are Love me, wherever you are Wherever you are

Maybe about a girl and a boy who live in a world full of hatred and darkness (We go where the wild blood flows). They had often disillusions with girlfriends/boyfriends, because love doesn´t count much for the other people in that world. And now the girl and the boy meet each other and discover that they are the only two people in that fucking world who can really love deeply (How do you love on a night without feelings?). The girl seems to be more optimistic as the boy (How do you love on a night without feelings? She says �love, I hear sound, I see fury� She says �love�s not a hostile condition�) but then he falls in love, too (Love me, wherever you are) Maybe that questions implies that they haven´t found each other yet, don´t know...


Love Symbols

  • Your eyes are blue like the sky.

good weather makes me happy, beauty of blue sky

  • If you smile, it`s like the sun goes up.

great feeling to se the sun go up,

  • Spending time with you is like to be on cloud 7.

being on cloud 7 is unimaginable to have such a girl

  • As God made the stars he put one in your eyes.

shining of the stars, she has something supernatural,she is the only shining thing in darkness

  • Did it hurt as you fell from heaven?

she is like an angel but has no more wings since being on earth, seems to be perfect


Question 4: Which of her claims/theses do you find unconvincing or even wrong ?

In my eyes not every claim of the author is convincing. For example the thesis that boys would take the "sudden death" exams. It`s true that there are boys who take risks but there are also boys who can also work constantly as girls do. I think it's a lie that more and more boys give up school because of their macho behaviour, because I think that it depends on what the boy is willing to learn and not how he behave.


The advert xy ...
question answer
what product? JBS underwear for men
aim and target group? Target group: for men

aim: to make the men buy their product

elements (description, relation between them? sexy woman sitting on the toilet, nearly naked just wearing a men`s underwear,hands a sport magazine, looking at the viewer if this advert, in the left corner:men don`t want to look at naked men,breasts are hidden from their long hairs, in the right corner the logo of the advert (jbs underwear)
how is "customers'" attention attracted? with a sexy young woman
message (of text and image)? Men don`t want to look at naked men.

Men think girls would be more interested in them if they wear those underwear,

how does the advert work, how are people influenced/conviced?
  • advert appeals to men
  • message is supported by showing the viewer a naked woman
  • advert uses customers' wishes, fears, etc. to get such a woman
  • rhetorical and stylistic devices in language and imagery: with the phrase
  • reader makes associations with/is reminded of Jbs underwear

Analysis

The advert from JBS underwear attracts the attention of men, because with this advert they want the man to buy their underwear.There is a young, sexy girl sitting on a toilet seat,almost naked just wearing a JBS pants which is hanging between their thin legs.Her boobs are only hidden by their long brown hairs.In her hands she has got a sports magazine and she is looking very sexy to the viewer of this advert, with a open mouth ( a bit) and she is looking directly to the viewer. In the left corner there is a little sentence: "Men don't want to look at naked men".This sentence will get more attention by men as by women because it's a fact that boys don't want to look at other naked boys (only if they are gay). Perhaps men think, if they would buy such a short girls like her would find them more attractive. As a result you can say that this advert succeeds and if it gets enough attention especially men will buy JBS underwear.


Drama

Voice:

  • Tone
  • Volume
  • Pitch
  • Pace
  • Clarity

Spoken language:

  • Language registers
  • Verse
  • Shakespearean language
  • Slang