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* become criminals | * become criminals | ||
| − | | | + | | don't have money to buy special things -> steal |
| − | | a | + | | girls steal e.g. a Prada handbag |
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* turn to violence | * turn to violence | ||
| − | | | + | | can't express themselves, envy, surroundings are bad -> learn solving conflicts by violence, aggression as a way of getting money |
| − | | | + | | throwing stones at expensive cars/ scratching with keys |
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* have no positive idols | * have no positive idols | ||
| − | | | + | | unemployed parents -> missing successful role models/ belief in working your way up |
| − | | | + | | girl sees her mother prostituting herself -> role model for her later life |
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* have no motivation | * have no motivation | ||
| − | | | + | | children think they don't have a chance to get out of poverty/bad money situation |
| − | | | + | | parents don't give their children any hopes (no disappointing later) |
| + | parents can't afford university -> tell them that from the start | ||
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* be in danger of becoming depressive | * be in danger of becoming depressive | ||
| − | | | + | | can't afford, what makes your dreams come true; work hard -> nearly no result; often have been rejected |
| − | | | + | | s.o. wants to found a company but he doesn't even get the money from the bank |
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* have no education → find no jobs | * have no education → find no jobs | ||
| − | | | + | | no money/supporting background |
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* elect extremists | * elect extremists | ||
| − | | | + | | believing in wrong promises, no achievement of big parties for poor people |
| − | | | + | | total equality (left party), electing the right party against foreigners taking their jobs |
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* develop anger and hatred | * develop anger and hatred | ||
| − | | | + | | -> see violence |
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* make money with prostitution | * make money with prostitution | ||
| − | | | + | | only way of getting money very fast, no need of qualification |
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* face teenage pregnancy/parenthood | * face teenage pregnancy/parenthood | ||
| − | | | + | | girls want something that loves them, role models -> seeing it as normal |
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Social Exclusion
See David Batty. Social exclusion: the issue explained
Signs of/factors leading to social exclusion:
- unemployment, poor skills ==> low incomes
- poor housing
- high crime
- bad health, drug addiction
- lack of medical care in deprived areas
- family breakdown
- high teenage pregnancy rate
- homelessness
- high number of young people not in education/training or employment and truancy/school exclusion
Solutions:
Government tries to establish institutions that
- analyse the causes and publish the results in reports.
- critically evaluate local governments' work to improve efforts to help socially excluded groups
- help to improve cooperation of departments / institutions to solve the multi-faceted problem
- initiate programmes to improve health of children, reduce teenage pregnancy and school exclusion and to counsel young people about education and employment
- coordinate efforts to encourage private investment in deprived communities.
Essay - Every child growing up in poverty is a ticking social timebomb
Collection of ideas
These children will often ...
| Thesis Statement | Supporting Points (more general/abstract) | Examples (specific, images) |
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don't have money to buy special things -> steal | girls steal e.g. a Prada handbag |
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can't express themselves, envy, surroundings are bad -> learn solving conflicts by violence, aggression as a way of getting money | throwing stones at expensive cars/ scratching with keys |
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unemployed parents -> missing successful role models/ belief in working your way up | girl sees her mother prostituting herself -> role model for her later life |
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children think they don't have a chance to get out of poverty/bad money situation | parents don't give their children any hopes (no disappointing later)
parents can't afford university -> tell them that from the start |
|
can't afford, what makes your dreams come true; work hard -> nearly no result; often have been rejected | s.o. wants to found a company but he doesn't even get the money from the bank |
|
no money/supporting background | |
|
believing in wrong promises, no achievement of big parties for poor people | total equality (left party), electing the right party against foreigners taking their jobs |
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-> see violence | |
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only way of getting money very fast, no need of qualification | |
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girls want something that loves them, role models -> seeing it as normal |
Writing an introduction
Check if the introduction ...
- introduces the topic (+)
- gives readers an idea of what dirction the essay will take (+)
- provides an overview of the structure/line of argument (+)
- implies/poses a question and creates an expactation/interetst in the readers (+)
- states general truths/defines what needs no definition (-)
- asks questions/announces answers but does not give them (-)
Possible Introductions
- Question:
- Basic thesis/contrast ==> Definition:
- Surprising fact / statistic:
- Quotation:
