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# Rusty was born in the Rocky Mountains in Montanna and as a jung horse he had a good life.
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# Rusty was born in the Rocky Mountains in Montanna and as a young horse he had a good life.
# Rusty and the other horses saw one day some men and they run dowen on a hill but it was to late it was a trap!
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# One day Rusty and the other horses saw some men and they ran down a hill, but it was too late: it was a trap!
3.The men put the horses on a truck but in the truck wasn't much room for them and they ridden about a bumpy street.
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# The men put the horses on a truck, but in the truck wasn't much room for them and they went along a bumpy street.
4. For some months Rusty stayed on a ranch in Colorado where Bronco Bill, the boss from this ranch, trained horses and riders. He tied Rusty to a post and hurt him.
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# For some months Rusty stayed on a ranch in Colorado where Bronco Bill, the boss of this ranch, trained horses and riders. He tied Rusty to a post and hurt him.
5. Rusty kicked and jumped around but then Bonco hit he again, the horses frightenbut they haven't some chance! Bronco called it 'training'.
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# Rusty kicked and jumped around but Bronco Bill hit him again and frightened him, so they didn't have any chance! Bronco called it 'training'.
6. Rusty hated Bronco Bill! When Bronco come near him he kicked him. Once Rusty broke Bronco's leg so he had to go to the hospital.
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# Rusty hated Bronco Bill, and he kicked him so that once he broke Bronco's leg so he had to go to the hospital.
7. One day Bronco brought  a woman, Cheryl, to Rusty's corral and she like him. She take Rusty to her and didn't tried him
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# One day Bronco brought  a woman, Cheryl, to Rusty's corral and she like him. She took Rusty to her and didn't hurt him
8.She never hit Rusty and he started to feel safe with her because he unterstood that here was somebody  
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# She never hit Rusty and he started to feel safe with her because he unterstood that here was somebody who wanted him to feel good.
who wanted him to feel good.
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# Cheryl practiced hard for the barrel races. Rusty's first race was terrible, but in the next races Rusty was much better, so he and Cheryl got a lot of money.
9.Cheryl practiced hard for the barrel race. Rusty's first race was terrible! But in the next races Rusty was very better! He and Cheryl get a lot of money.
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# The barrel races were easy for Rusty at first because he was young. But then he got older and slower  and he started to lose races. Then Cheryl needed a younger horse and sold him to someone else.
10. The barrels was easy for Rusty at first because he was young. But then he getting older and slower  and he started to lose races. Then Cheryl a younger horse and sold him to someone else.
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# The man who bought Rusty was Ed Gooch. He and his wife are both nice to Rusty. The ranch is in the Rocky Mountains of Montana, so he's come home at last!
11. The manwho bought Rusty was Ed Gooch. He and his wife are both nice to Rusty. The ranch is in the Rocky Mountains of Montana, so he's come home at last!
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Version vom 8. Juni 2008, 10:32 Uhr

  1. Rusty was born in the Rocky Mountains in Montanna and as a young horse he had a good life.
  2. One day Rusty and the other horses saw some men and they ran down a hill, but it was too late: it was a trap!
  3. The men put the horses on a truck, but in the truck wasn't much room for them and they went along a bumpy street.
  4. For some months Rusty stayed on a ranch in Colorado where Bronco Bill, the boss of this ranch, trained horses and riders. He tied Rusty to a post and hurt him.
  5. Rusty kicked and jumped around but Bronco Bill hit him again and frightened him, so they didn't have any chance! Bronco called it 'training'.
  6. Rusty hated Bronco Bill, and he kicked him so that once he broke Bronco's leg so he had to go to the hospital.
  7. One day Bronco brought a woman, Cheryl, to Rusty's corral and she like him. She took Rusty to her and didn't hurt him
  8. She never hit Rusty and he started to feel safe with her because he unterstood that here was somebody who wanted him to feel good.
  9. Cheryl practiced hard for the barrel races. Rusty's first race was terrible, but in the next races Rusty was much better, so he and Cheryl got a lot of money.
  10. The barrel races were easy for Rusty at first because he was young. But then he got older and slower and he started to lose races. Then Cheryl needed a younger horse and sold him to someone else.
  11. The man who bought Rusty was Ed Gooch. He and his wife are both nice to Rusty. The ranch is in the Rocky Mountains of Montana, so he's come home at last!