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1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good li'''ve'''.
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# Rusty was born in the Rocky Mountains in Montanna and as a young horse he had a good life.
 
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# One day Rusty and the other horses saw some men and they ran down a hill, but it was too late: it was a trap!
2. Th'''a'''n one day some '''man''' came and '''cought''' Rusty and some other horses and '''put''' took! them away from their home
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# The men put the horses on a truck, but in the truck wasn't much room for them and they went along a bumpy street.
 
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# For some months Rusty stayed on a ranch in Colorado where Bronco Bill, the boss of this ranch, trained horses and riders. He tied Rusty to a post and hurt him.
3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frightened''',<== ??? Bezug?''' that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.
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# Rusty kicked and jumped around but Bronco Bill hit him again and frightened him, so they didn't have any chance! Bronco called it 'training'.
 
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# Rusty hated Bronco Bill, and he kicked him so that once he broke Bronco's leg so he had to go to the hospital.
4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some month'''s''' ''',???''' was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rust'''ys''' back and legs with a heavy sack.
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# One day Bronco brought  a woman, Cheryl, to Rusty's corral and she like him. She took Rusty to her and didn't hurt him
 
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# She never hit Rusty and he started to feel safe with her because he unterstood that here was somebody who wanted him to feel good.
5.He treat'''ed''' Rusty really bad, but he called it training.
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# Cheryl practiced hard for the barrel races. Rusty's first race was terrible, but in the next races Rusty was much better, so he and Cheryl got a lot of money.
 
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# The barrel races were easy for Rusty at first because he was young. But then he got older and slower and he started to lose races. Then Cheryl needed a younger horse and sold him to someone else.
6.One day a '''j'''oung woman called Cheryl came and '''take''' Rusty with her.
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# The man who bought Rusty was Ed Gooch. He and his wife are both nice to Rusty. The ranch is in the Rocky Mountains of Montana, so he's come home at last!
 
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7.She '''tried''' Rusty very well and he dec'''ied''' to do the best for her.
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8.Rusty and Cheryl practi'''ce?''' for rodeo events and they won the races.
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9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.
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10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.
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  1. Rusty was born in the Rocky Mountains in Montanna and as a young horse he had a good life.
  2. One day Rusty and the other horses saw some men and they ran down a hill, but it was too late: it was a trap!
  3. The men put the horses on a truck, but in the truck wasn't much room for them and they went along a bumpy street.
  4. For some months Rusty stayed on a ranch in Colorado where Bronco Bill, the boss of this ranch, trained horses and riders. He tied Rusty to a post and hurt him.
  5. Rusty kicked and jumped around but Bronco Bill hit him again and frightened him, so they didn't have any chance! Bronco called it 'training'.
  6. Rusty hated Bronco Bill, and he kicked him so that once he broke Bronco's leg so he had to go to the hospital.
  7. One day Bronco brought a woman, Cheryl, to Rusty's corral and she like him. She took Rusty to her and didn't hurt him
  8. She never hit Rusty and he started to feel safe with her because he unterstood that here was somebody who wanted him to feel good.
  9. Cheryl practiced hard for the barrel races. Rusty's first race was terrible, but in the next races Rusty was much better, so he and Cheryl got a lot of money.
  10. The barrel races were easy for Rusty at first because he was young. But then he got older and slower and he started to lose races. Then Cheryl needed a younger horse and sold him to someone else.
  11. The man who bought Rusty was Ed Gooch. He and his wife are both nice to Rusty. The ranch is in the Rocky Mountains of Montana, so he's come home at last!