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1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good live.
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1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good li'''ve'''.
  
2. Than one day some man came and cought Rustyand some other horses and put them away from their home
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2. Th'''a'''n one day some '''man''' came and '''cought''' Rusty and some other horses and '''put''' took! them away from their home
  
3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frightened, that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.
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3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frightened''',<== ??? Bezug?''' that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.
  
4.Rusty stayed for some month on the ranch in CO, was a man who called Bronco Bill. He hit Rustys back and legwith a heavy sack.
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4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some month'''s''' ''',???''' was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rust'''ys''' back and legs with a heavy sack.
  
5.He treat Rusty really bad, but he called it training.
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5.He treat'''ed''' Rusty really bad, but he called it training.
  
6.One day a joung woman called Cheryl came and take Rusty with.
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6.One day a '''j'''oung woman called Cheryl came and '''take''' Rusty with her.
  
7.She tried Rusty very good and he decied to the best for her.
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7.She '''tried''' Rusty very well and he dec'''ied''' to do the best for her.
  
8.Rusty and Cheryl practice for rodeo events and they won the races.
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8.Rusty and Cheryl practi'''ce?''' for rodeo events and they won the races.
  
9.Later She gave Rusty somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.
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9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.
  
 
10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.
 
10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.

Version vom 12. Juni 2008, 16:31 Uhr

1. Rusty was born in the Rocky mountains in montana and as a young horse he had a good live.

2. Than one day some man came and cought Rusty and some other horses and put took! them away from their home

3.The men put them in a truck and the horses were very frightened,<== ??? Bezug? that was the end of a long time of fear and pain.

4.Rusty stayed on the ranch in CO for some months ,??? was a man who was called Bronco Bill. He hit Rustys back and legs with a heavy sack.

5.He treated Rusty really bad, but he called it training.

6.One day a joung woman called Cheryl came and take Rusty with her.

7.She tried Rusty very well and he decied to do the best for her.

8.Rusty and Cheryl practice? for rodeo events and they won the races.

9.Later she sold Rusty to somewhere else, because he got too slow and too old.

10.Ed Gooch bought Rusty and took him to his ranch in Montana.